magical baby-steps of love compassion and gratitude
hilly destination visible high fall
with-in water lucid hidden rocks
mesmerized to see elan of water
fascinate to-see half dipped stone
jeans fold-up till knee and step-in
charm-walk upon projected stone
kinda philosophy my way to think
zeal of each step moves cautiously
may walk-out to Illusive hardships
water alike life-symbol, rest spines
constant runs serve life 'fresh-cool'
stepping alert send to-focused goal
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beautiful praising comment by respected Candice Stern -
ReplyDeletewow.. this one is really quite captivating. not a lot of poems get me to think THIS much. good job :) Please do keep on writing. - See more at: http://allpoetry.com/poem/11590316-Steps-on-Stone-by-Lata#sthash.8h8FF8sq.dpuf
Beautiful remark by poet simpliterature - My favorite line is: fascinate to-see half dipped stone jeans fold-up till knee and step-in charm-walk upon projected stone . Great illustration !!! You are painting with words. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteSee more at: http://allpoetry.com/poem/11590316-Steps-on-Stone-by-Lata#sthash.8h8FF8sq.dpuf