आ गए तुम?
आ गए तुम?
द्वार खुला है, अंदर आओ..!
पर तनिक ठहरो..
ड्योढी पर पड़े पायदान पर,
अपना अहं झाड़ आना..!
ड्योढी पर पड़े पायदान पर,
अपना अहं झाड़ आना..!
मधुमालती लिपटी है मुंडेर से,
अपनी नाराज़गी वहीं उड़ेल आना..!
अपनी नाराज़गी वहीं उड़ेल आना..!
तुलसी के क्यारे में,
मन की चटकन चढ़ा आना..!
मन की चटकन चढ़ा आना..!
अपनी व्यस्ततायें, बाहर खूंटी पर ही टांग आना..!
जूतों संग, हर नकारात्मकता उतार आना..!
जूतों संग, हर नकारात्मकता उतार आना..!
बाहर किलोलते बच्चों से,
थोड़ी शरारत माँग लाना..!
थोड़ी शरारत माँग लाना..!
वो गुलाब के गमले में, मुस्कान लगी है..
तोड़ कर पहन आना..!
तोड़ कर पहन आना..!
लाओ, अपनी उलझनें मुझे थमा दो..
तुम्हारी थकान पर, मनुहारों का पंखा झुला दूँ..!
तुम्हारी थकान पर, मनुहारों का पंखा झुला दूँ..!
देखो, शाम बिछाई है मैंने,
सूरज क्षितिज पर बाँधा है,
लाली छिड़की है नभ पर..!
सूरज क्षितिज पर बाँधा है,
लाली छिड़की है नभ पर..!
प्रेम और विश्वास की मद्धम आंच पर, चाय चढ़ाई है,
घूँट घूँट पीना..!
सुनो, इतना मुश्किल भी नहीं हैं जीना..!!
Poetry written by Nidhi Saxena Not Mahashweta Devi Ji my apologies
कृपया इस बात की पुष्टि करें कि यह रचना महाश्वेता देवी की है या निधि सक्सेना जी की ! असमंजस और दुविधा की इस स्थिति से बाहर निकलना अति आवश्यक है ! कृपया तुरंत निदान करें ! आभार होगा आपका !
ReplyDeleteDear Sadhana Vaid ji , thanks for asking , i was also amazed when i get counter check , i get clear by my own means and find this is written by Poetess Nidhi Saxena ji .not by Poetess Mahashweta ji . still i am not clear , trying to get more authentications . Definitly hard work need to pay to rightone . Regards.
DeleteI find only one link for Nidhi ji is in
DeleteDetail of Poetess http://kavitakosh.org/kk/%E0%A4%A8%E0%A4%BF%E0%A4%A7%E0%A4%BF_%E0%A4%B8%E0%A4%95%E0%A5%8D%E0%A4%B8%E0%A5%87%E0%A4%A8%E0%A4%BE
poetry आओ! मगर ठहरो / निधि सक्सेना :
http://kavitakosh.org/kk/%E0%A4%86%E0%A4%93!_%E0%A4%AE%E0%A4%97%E0%A4%B0_%E0%A4%A0%E0%A4%B9%E0%A4%B0%E0%A5%8B_/_%E0%A4%A8%E0%A4%BF%E0%A4%A7%E0%A4%BF_%E0%A4%B8%E0%A4%95%E0%A5%8D%E0%A4%B8%E0%A5%87%E0%A4%A8%E0%A4%BE
rest of all i find under name of late Mahashweta Devi ji
these are :-http://hindi.speakingtree.in/blog/kavita-mahashweta-devi
http://chorichoriyaan.blogspot.in/2016/08/blog-post.html
http://pryag-ek-khoj.blogspot.in/
http://hindikaraslo.blogspot.in/2016/10/and-sayings-by-swami-vivekanand.html
https://www.instagram.com/p/BJ645vAgPwa/
Still i am on Search .... for authentication right one ! thank you
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Deleteऔर मुझे लगता है जैसे कि आजकल लोग बच्चन, गुलज़ार आदि के नाम पर कुछ भी सोशल मीडिया पर प्रचारित करते हैं शायद उसी तरह इस रचना को भी महाश्वेता देवी के नाम से जोड़ा जा रहा है|
Deletehttp://hindi.webdunia.com/author/%E0%A4%A8%E0%A4%BF%E0%A4%A7%E0%A4%BF-%E0%A4%B8%E0%A4%95%E0%A5%8D%E0%A4%B8%E0%A5%87%E0%A4%A8%E0%A4%BE-244.html
Deletemany thanks for correct Info , my appllogies toward her and great soul of Mahashweta ji , i will do correction as on my making , as it possible for me , my sincere appologies .
DeleteDear Friend , after providing link , i have tried personally to contact her , i also requested her to say something so that i can highlight her acknowledgement , but facebook is nonresponsive . Yet she is not accepting her writing .
DeleteStill i am in wait for her acknowledgement .
http://kavitakosh.org/kk/निधि_सक्सेना
ReplyDeletethank you Friend , we have enough evidence regarding authorised poetess is truly Nidhi Saxena ji . i have direct conversation also with poetess .
DeleteHello dear writer
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DeleteHello dear writer
ReplyDeleteSince long time I have been in search of the original writer of this poet.Around 20 years back I went through this poetry's Oriya translation. It's an Amazing poetry.I want to translate this into Oriya language again.Respected poetress old allowed me.Thanks.
ReplyDeletethank you Sagarika das , very good intention you have , congratulations ! will trasnfer your msg to poetess and see whats see says, as in my case i involved her in late , as i get information late , but she accepted alse little correction on name of poetess , and its fair . keep it up !!
DeleteDear Sagarika , just i get clean chit for you , she is very happy to know your intentions but poetess core wish to keep her name intact with original poem and also dont desturb core feel of poetry .. keep it up and must share your work .
DeleteSorry it's please not old.
ReplyDeleteDear Sagarika , kindly share your link please whatever you find 20 years back and of which poet , kindly share , i am in wait . thank you
DeleteHello latajii,thanks for your prompt action .Again thanks to the poetress.Let me try my best.I have discussed this poetry with Mrs Sarita Malik (M.A.in Hindi) and Mrs.Anjana Rastogi(read. Hindi teacher) and prepared to translate this.I will intimate it's photo copy to u.
DeleteAgain,as far as I remember I went through its Oriya translation years back in that time most pronouns women monthly "Suchsrita". Please give me the time of creation of this poem .I shall try my best to find out that translated piece
DeleteThanking you.
goodmorning and thank you for update Sagarika das , i will communicate same to poetess
DeleteIt means this poem is not belong to Nidhi saxena.
ReplyDeletethanks to understand wrong , but i m surprised how you understand this is not of Nidhi Saxena . pl reply . i will correct .
ReplyDeleteमैं भी ढूंढती रही किये रचना महाश्वेता जी या महादेवी वर्मा जी ने कब लिखा और सिस पुस्तक में
ReplyDelete"आ गए तुम ..." गूगल और एनसायक्लोपीडीया पर भी महाश्वेतादेवी की रचना बताई जा रही है,वास्तविकता क्या है?
ReplyDeleteVaatvikta aapke saamne hai aur pramanik hai . vishvas karne yogy hai. Kaviyatri se mera seedha sampark hai aur mahashweta ji ka jivan charit rachna bhi meri samjhi hai .. Uske baad hi aap dekh samte hai maine correction bhi kiya. Naman
ReplyDeleteThis poem was written by mahadevi verma...I think it was true..
ReplyDeletePl correct yourself Praveer Varma , i was also confused but not i am very sure after contacting her , Originally written by Nidhi Saxena
DeleteVery poor video of such an excellent poem. That is what, we are very poor presenters.
ReplyDeleteThis is written by Nidhiji. In my column in gujarati na med mari hanuman chalisa, I mention es this poem. Later I fumbled for the writer, I mean poetess. Mahashveta devi, mahadevi varma, were more found with this poem. Even senior bachchanji, is also in the list. After much research on net, i m of the opinion that this is written by Nidhiji
ReplyDeleteHi Lataji.How r u? Though it is very late.But I am sending you the published oriya translation of the poem.Even I have recorded a video on it by my own voice.I want to share it.
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